Ava Reid’s Lady Macbeth Is Ferociously Feminist But Not Particularly True to Shakespeare’s Text

While there are elements of Lady Macbeth that will feel familiar to fans of Shakespeare’s play—a trio of distinctly horrifying witches, a prophecy that requires a forest to move, a Scottish warrior who murders his way to a throne—it’s difficult to argue that this book qualifies as a retelling of the original. At some points, the only similarity between the two stories is that some (but not all!) of the characters share the same names. It’s deeply frustrating because for all the book’s successes—striking imagery, lush and beautifully written prose, a fiercely feminist point of view—it’s hard not to wonder if Lady Macbeth would have worked better if it were simply an original story, rather than a retelling that pays scant interest to many of the themes found in Shakespeare’s play. It’s not clear that the comparison between the two does this novel (which, again, has a lot of enjoyable pieces!) any favors.

In Reid’s version, we meet the future Lady Macbeth on the road to Scotland. Here she’s a seventeen-year-old French princess named Roscilla, whose reputation is already tinged with a whiff of the supernatural. Rumored to have been cursed by a witch, it’s said that one look into her eyes can drive men mad. As a result, she is forced to move through the world veiled, which often serves as both a metaphorical means of setting her apart from the world and protecting her innermost thoughts from those around her. Her husband, the Thane of Glamis, is not the sort of man she’d dreamed of marrying, and life with him is not an easy one. His castle is remote and cold. Macbeth himself is brusque and standoffish, with plenty of secrets that unfold throughout the novel. The most important of these is probably that his castle has a hidden subterranean chamber where three blind witches are chained in captivity, forced to prophesy for him. 

The larger story follows some of the familiar beats of the original play: Duncan does indeed visit Macbeth’s castle, only to never go forth from it again. There is something of a succession crisis between his two sons following his death. Banquo is murdered after the witches prophesize a great future for his offspring. But, unfortunately, almost none of its emotional core feels true to the characters these figures are meant to represent. Part of the tragedy of Shakespeare’s story is that Macbeth is a traumatized man ultimately corrupted by his own ambition. He wasn’t a brute and while it’s more than fair to argue that he becomes a monster by the time the curtain falls, he doesn’t begin the story as one. 

Here, Roscille is little more than a prisoner of the man she’s been forced to wed, relocated to a country whose residents are depicted as little more than violent thugs. She is constantly being defined by her relationships to the various men in her life.  And she has little agency of her own, no matter how often the text insists she’s smart and clever. Roscille is so helpless she must literally learn to dress herself upon her arrival in Scotland, and one of her character’s most significant emotional moments—the murder of Duncan—is rewritten to become an act she is forced to commit against her will. But what’s most upsetting is perhaps the way this story reimagines Roscille’s relationship with her husband.

For many of us, the complicated relationship between the Macbeths is the twisted, beating heart of Shakespeare’s story. Their marriage is surprisingly egalitarian, a genuine partnership that presents both parties equally responsible for the horrors that befall them. Lady Macbeth’s encouragement of her husband’s scheming is matched by her own ambition, and he’s genuinely devastated by her spiral into madness and death. In Reid’s version, the two are essentially at odds with one another from their first meeting. Macbeth is depicted as huge and hulking, vaguely barbaric, and constantly bloodthirsty. Though he apparently trusts his new wife enough to reveal some of his most closely guarded secrets—the book doesn’t do much in terms of explaining why he feels this way—the two barely interact with one another and when they do there’s a strangely veiled threat of sexual violence that sits starkly at odds with the way most of us have come to conceptualize this relationship.

In many ways, it’s fair to ask why this story needed to be a Macbeth retelling at all. It has so little in common with the original’s themes or character dynamics, and it often feels more like it should be a Bluebeard-inspired Gothic saga rather than an attempt to take on Shakespeare by way of the politics of medieval Scotland. Reid’s attempt is not lacking in ambition, and its feminist insistence on giving Roscille the power to resist and reshape a patriarchal society is admirable. There’s genuinely beautiful prose here and some truly startling imagery—particularly of the witches—

It’s just … .not the story of Lady Macbeth, and we do both Shakespeare’s original and Reid’s creation, which is often quite sympathetic and compelling, a disservice to pretend that it is. 

Lady Macbeth is available now wherever books are sold. 

Lacy Baugher Milas is the Books Editor at Paste Magazine, but loves nerding out about all sorts of pop culture. You can find her on Twitter @LacyMB